The Baseball AU (or Happy Birthday were_duck!)
Thursday, May 7th, 2009 05:33 pm( The Baseball AU )
( The Baseball AU )
Greg lurches into Nick’s hand and shudders, but now Nick is nothing but soothing, drawing the pleasure out of him with long, sure strokes, licking and biting the back of his neck and tops of his shoulders, and whispering hot, delicious nonsense in his ear. Finally, when he feels the pressure building, he cracks open his eyes again to meet Gil’s stare. If he felt devoured before, he doesn’t have words for what he feels now. The intensity, the flush rising across Gil’s face, the tent in Gil’s pants, the way Gil’s hands are rhythmically clenching and unclenching, carefully held away from his body. It’s shocking and hot and “Ah! Nick! Oh! Ohhhh! G-Gillll!” he wails as his orgasm is ripped out of him. He’s spurting all over Nick’s hand and the nice bedspread, shocked by all the sensations coursing through him.
After all this time, this is still the most satisfying story I’ve read. The threesome is so realistic, and the boys seem like actual guys. In fact, all of Bone’s men read as so convincingly male, that for a very long time, I was convinced Bone was male. Silly me, I had no idea how unlikely that was.
I hope, by this time, that other lovely parts of you have been intrigued, are in fact envious of the care and attention lavished on your hapless digits. Does the back of your knee pine for attention? Shall I dip my tongue there for more exploration, or merely rub my closed lips in that silken fold? Purrrrrrr…. Lie back, sweet one, I have not yet begun to acquaint you fully with my naughty tongue. I’ll grip your hips and drag mySelf back up to re-explore the cavern of your mouth. Mated tongues—gently, slickly dueling. Does the roof of your mouth tickle when I lick it?
from the SGA Baseball AU that ate my brain last summer (Sheppard/McKay):